Live and Learn

I am posting some revisions I made to my plein air painting I did yesterday.  I am now a firm believer in not posting a painting till I have at least waited a day or two.  When I relooked at it, the shadows were all I saw plus the foreground did not recede or draw one eyes into the middle ground.  I did some revisions mainly focusing on how I could change the foreground.  I think it helped.  My thinking is, it will be one of the learning studies that may well be another toned canvas in the future but it has done its job in teaching me to critique and or plan better.   Any suggestions are welcomed.  Have a happy day!.